The many lines are revealing the man’s pose quickly – although we loose the marks because I have overworked the pose.
I like the drawing labelled ‘8’ as the man twists and the proportions of the man has been captured well. However the drawing does look flat –
Again Number eight, the lines here are used well i feel , even though i have reworked I had to capture the hands and arms – the pose is really nice.
The first picture above stomach and mid torso feels like I have emphasised the turn of the body and we are drawn to this darker pencil mark. The tone used adds depth to the otherwise flat drawing.